 PeachJuice. 2009-02-21 . chapter 1You're quite talented.
Although, there's one thing that you could have tried to make more clear. What is his type, if not girls like her, than what?
Anyways, I still really enjoyed reading it.
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 Alice 2009-02-18 . chapter 1 Oh, it's hard to explain. Your story is clear yet vague at the same time. So realistic and raw. It's descriptive but not going overboard. One shots are hard to convey what types of people they are but your characterization is amazing. From what his dad did, you can tell what kind of person Ryan is and how Emily thinks.
You have a great writing style.
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