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Janelle 2009-04-11 . chapter 1
I want to hear the rest of the story! I like the whole idea of the talking fox and how Bree is strong willed and very smart for a 10 yr old. I'm curious to what powers these two children have (the fox too?). I'm assuming that they won't know the full extent b/c they are children and have to grow into their powers (?), but what do they know already?

Are the powers in them, do they get their magic from the woods/objects? It sounds like they're born with certain gifts, but can they learn more?

Do they have some ideas based off of their parents (?) Do they know their parents?

This potential bad guy, Saxen I'm really interested about too. He also one of these "born magicians," or does he just have "magic tools" b/c he works for the government? I have a sense that he's a good guy though. I guess that I'll just have to wait and find out.

I have so many questions just based off of the little I read, but this story is AMAZING!

What will happen next? I guess that it's up to you.

-Janelle
leonsgriever69 2009-02-16 . chapter 1
I LOVE SAXEN! *sigh* make him real, Emily. I want him :)

and you'll get my full comments in class on Wednesday.

Oh and darling...it's "Literally" not "liberally" lol in your opening statement, but I really really like this story. Bree makes me laugh :)

it was my favorite in the packet...

now...UPDATE HM WOMAN!
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