Aww. How cute! When it was getting towards the end I was beginning to wonder, "if it keeps going he won't be able to confess to his best friend!" You know, like in all the other cliches. Then I thought, "Hey..could it be that..." Turns out, I was right! It was a amazing twist! You took a regular cliche and twisted into something fun and touching. Great job! :)

Aww I loved this! So cute!

LOVED THE STORY. Beautifully written. Mind blown! :)

:D Luv it! XD

dis is like BANG ON awesum totally in love wid it :)

Oh my gosh! I nearly died! I was so frustrated because I kept on thinking, 'he could fall out of love with his girlfriend and get with his best friend instead!' but then I kept on reading and I realized that he loved her too much and he would never do that and I was getting sad because the best friend was going to have an unhappy ending.

So then that plot twist comes of nowhere, and I'm nearly crying cos oh my gosh it's just amazing! Wow. I've never read a story like this, and this was just beautiful . I loved it a lot.

Well. This is fantastically adorable! It's obvious these two are head over heels in love with each other, and I loved the twist in the end with the bestie and girlfriend being one and the same. The dialogue between these two was perfect and real! I swear my (guy) best friend, and I have had conversations that are nearly identical to the conversation these friends/couple had (except we are definitely not in love with each other in that way at all) hahah. Very heart warming and cute, and I definitely reread it again right after I finished it and realized his best friend was his girlfriend ha.

lol i didnt know they were the same one... lol i had to reread it :p nice story

I absolutely love this.

This is honestly one of the cutest one shots I've ever read. I definitely wasn't expecting the ending. I'm a sucker for a good "best friends in love story". I just published the first chapter of mine and I can only hope that it ends as sweet as your story.

In short: I LOVED IT.

Oh... That was so good. All through the story I was like "No, poor best friend who loves him" and hating on the girlfriend, then my relief was just sooooo great when I found out the twist at the end. Good story- I've commented on three so far. More than I've done for any other author (in seperate stories- there's this one story I love and the author hasn't updated in half a year so I'm re-reading and commenting a lot)

THIS IS SOOOO CUTE! OMG! OMG!

You are too good! :)

I WAS NOT EXPECTING THAT.

I was actually slightly pissed at him for hanging up on his best friend so suddenly.

But Omg... so sweet ;)

Hey,

I thought this story was really cute and I like the idea that when he was most upset - he could still turn to his best friend [even though she was his girl friend]. :)

awwwwwwww:) this was brilliant, even though i guessed what would happen about halfway through... i ADORED all the cheesy cliches and stuff! good job!