"and i see the shadow of love engraved on my wrists."

man, that line can be interpreted into so many ways. i think that's why it's my favorite.

i LOVEloveLOVE this so much. you wrote down your thoughts, pure honest thoughts and you include simple every day things like your mom telling you to do things, and even going to the bathroom to simply think (you aren't the only one to do that, hun.)

but most of all, i wanted to tell you to be your own person.

faving it... now.

I really like the thought process as well as the format here.

Nice work.

It tells a story in a poetic way. Very nice!

"watch the memories replay, watch

the sunlight change. watch the hours pass."

I liked these lines because the speaker just seems zoned out, not feeling anything but the time going by. Nice job...Some parts of this reminded me of my past. Good job

i think a know two people who might be able to help cause they've been there and made it through: me and commadore crazy bottoms )

paints a very vivid picture in my head. i like it ;)