Isn't it 'C'est belle' instead of 'C'est bel' ?
Sou nee, this piece of work was pretty cool.
Could've been a little bit more in depth, but hey ^^
It's not like I could've wrote it better ^^

GOOD READ, GOOD READ! I did like the pace and vehicle with which you chose to partake upon your direction. It had a very good, creepy, twisted love feel, and read like a short film-- very vivid, very close shots, vibrant sound where it matters and hushed breath where it was cued. Good writing!

Très bien! A good plot, wonderfully written...If you'll allow me to correct your French in a few places, though? As it is Cosette, a girl, talking, it should be désolée instead of désole, because it has to match. And, when you say "c'est bel"--I'm not sure what you were referring to, you may be correct, but if it was the music, music is feminine, so it should be "belle". Otherwise, great story, I love the imagery. ^_^