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you made me cry

I said that I wouldn't say it, but I must say it. This is sad. The fluff was utterly adorable and evenly balanced out the sadness, methinks, making this ending bittersweet. It think the part that made me kinda cry was at the end when he started to blame himself for Toby's death. Aw, well, this was still very good.

This was sad, but very well-written. You had very good development.

I think I'm even sadder because Toby died on my birthday... Hm.

Anyway, good job!

That's so depressing. It was good. But depressing. It's just so sad, imagining the poor little baby at the grave. You kinda just want to pull him out of the computer and hug him and tell him everything's gonna be okay, you know? Well, I liked it, anyway. Good job.

This is really sad. You somehow managed to capture this despair, and it is incredible. You did a great job. And I am still sad!!

OMFG

;~;

My love, this story is omfgsad and I love it and if you take it down, I will cry.

It was amazing. EMOASF*CK, but amazing. I love it. ILU!


XO

Aww. That is sad.

Not too much mush, just right, I think. Lovely really.

Zeb