This was very well written, minus a spelling error or two.
Notably... "reign" not "rein" is what I think you were going for?
I really enjoyed this part as well:

"Throwing their lives away
In the pursuit of something
so delicate in nature
A hazy concept
unfocused and ephemeral in existence
Taking years to be built
upon a wobbly foundation of war"

The imagery in this is subtle, but enjoyable.
I rather enjoy reading all of your poetry.
Well done, kudos.
:]

I enjoyed this very much. Very direct...I like it.

Truly,
Twyla