Wow...this is quite an eccentric piece. Never the less, I enjoyed every moment reading this. Every sentence was quite captivating, and I think it has an interesting theme going for it.
I definitely want to see what happens next, and I hope it's soon.

Very well written, yet again :)

yummy.. hahaha ery interesting characters, and ilike the theories of teh are boreal XD

Wanna see what's comming!

My God this was quite enjoyable to read...
good job!
Your characters appeal to me very much.
Great vocabulary usage :-D
Sexy character this beast named "X" :D

~Mictian

Well this sure was a breakaway from usual stories. I like that the uh being actually speaks and is very philosophical o.O In such stories they're usually silent and only moan, if you catch my drift. I love the language and words, so I'll definetly steal some of the neat-looking ones! It's well-done how they fit in and the language flows though, not many can do that. Great job!

i always look forward to each time any of your stories are updated. i am still waiting on nepenthe to be served to me on a silver platter!

i find that a lot of fiction lately has attempted to take on the tone of a variety of well-known authors that write in an annoyingly disjointed way. i think you know who i may be talking about. i like that i can go through pages and pages of anything you've written without coming down with a case of TL;DR, just because of how refreshing the fluidity and dream-like quality of the subject matter itself is. you write in a way that is not trying it's hardest to be something it's not. you aren't trying to completely shock and disgruntle your reader, you aren't shoving angsty vampire luv down our throats.

The reason why I love your stories is that it's always so different and unique. This one was rather disturbing, but since when did macabre deter me? Hope you end up continuing this (and still waiting for an update on Nepenthe)