"so land me
to where my palms are enough
to cup winter sun"
Love these lines :)
This was just wonderfully written!

god this is so beautiful.

wow this is really really good!
I love the imagery in the first stanza!
So amazing!

this is really, really good. the imagery is unusaul. it definately grabs your attention

there is something really here
something poignant,
something aching,
something plaintive
something really understandable --

i think we all feel that infinity
is not enough sometimes
that what used to hit us beautiful doesn't
go so deep anymore.

that we can't capture what fills us the most.

i love these few words you've written here,
they speak to me.

wonderfull.
wonderfull.
wonderfull.

:)