|Reviews for honeysuckle lane|
| a silenced revolution 3/1/09 . chapter 1
love your formatting, the main poem plus the lines to the right. and the graphic, emotional face of this. the words have power, even through the hurt, and it shows... - it cuts.
"much, but really, you're just trying mend a wound"
-trying *to* mend, i think you meant.
| Manifest-Destiny-x X 3/1/09 . chapter 1
There's a lot of emothion behind this piece, for sure. I like that, because the poem is therefore more believable.
The formatting was interesting and held my attention. I would love to see more work in this style.
| Kolle 3/1/09 . chapter 1
The displacement worked flawlessly, I loved it; it didn't draw away from the flow. The imagery was affective, powerful. Good job ]
| angel-Janna 2/20/09 . chapter 1
God, that was a good poem. The wound is my favourite part, and a close second is the x on her back. The poem got under the skin of the love-hate, and the confusion.
| Quietly Insane 2/19/09 . chapter 1
Wow. That was very good, I really enjoyed it. I loved the structure & how it spelled out, "sometimes i fucking hate you." The imagery was great. But, I do think you could have capitalized the I's. Overall, great job.
| softersin 2/17/09 . chapter 1
| ode to melancholy 2/17/09 . chapter 1
Very good, old or not. I love it.