 igot4 2009-11-07 . chapter 7Please update soon this is good... Does she realize its not her dads fault he didn't know about her |
 BlueAki 2009-10-09 . chapter 7Whoa, i thought she wanted to know him? Cant wait to see the next chapter! |
 BlueAki 2009-10-09 . chapter 6I have been reading this story for the past couple of hours and I just can't stop. I think that its well planned out and it definitely makes me want to see what else is going to happen. I just have one problem. Sometimes there isn't any consistency with characters names and it definitely confuses me. |
 BlueAki 2009-10-08 . chapter 2I can already tell that's his daughter. |
 dreamwriter33 2009-08-09 . chapter 7Love this story! Please keep writing. I'm very curious to see what follows. Thanks. |
 hatnim77 2009-07-26 . chapter 7I like it! I like it!
I was so sad when I went to click the next chapter button to find there was none.
Update son! |
 Georgia 2009-07-17 . chapter 7 I like, I like!! X)
Lea is being so mean D: Though...I'd be pretty ** off too. I felt so sad for Lance when he was watching the footage of Lea's birth. Another fantastic chapter!! : ) Thank you |
 Lovee. 2009-06-29 . chapter 7 I love thiss storyy and this chapter was a little bit suprising
i didnt think Lea would be so harsh, for no valid reason,
also i would love more story line with her and her boo. lol
its a amazing story |
 intellectual titmouse 2009-06-28 . chapter 7damn, lea's frustrating! but she's a completely believable character so don't change a thing about her. her anger is understood and perhaps it comes with the territory of being an only child or something, but she has to see at some point that her mother (as dumb as it was) thought she was doing her best. i like isla's mom too. she seems sweet and very supportive but a no-bs type of woman. i'm not even sure if i really want lance and isla to get back together. they both seem so . . . i don't know. annoying at this point i guess. it's hard to like either one of them. keep it up though! |
 LuLaTee 2009-06-28 . chapter 7 Loved it! However, there are parts in the story where you confuse the names. Where you mean to say Lea, you say Bella and vice versa. It'd be nice if those would come together. |
 sjrucker 2009-06-28 . chapter 7I'm loving the dialogue btw the three of them! The range of emotion they are all experiencing is real. I hope Lance realizes the moments he missed out on and the life he could have had with Bella and his daughter...hopefully, they can all come back to a loving, wholesome place as a family of 3. |
 BrownSugar15 2009-06-27 . chapter 7I really like your story, can't wait to read the next chapter. |
 Writing4Eternity 2009-06-27 . chapter 7Your writing confuses the HECK out of me. You get me confused when you write Lea and Bella. |
 bwilkins 2009-06-27 . chapter 7I just don't understand why Lea is being so nasty to Lance. Why is she so angry with him? It's not his fault things are the way they are. Thanks for the great update! |
 Spanishfly69 2009-06-26 . chapter 7WOW! I am really feeling for Lance right now. I understand Lea's anger but why in heaven's name does somebody not come out and be straight with this girl?
Its annoying that she is "tearing him a new one" when he NEVER knew about her... This is all because of an "executive" decision her mom made... I can't wait to see where you go with this and I love that her Bella's mom told her... It may have been the "right choice then... but other times call for other choices... or something to that effect.
GREAT UPDATE! I hope you don't keep us waiting to much longer for the next installment! |