=) Closure. That was nice and sweet. This whole 3-poem-ness is going in my favorites

This was a good poem. I liked the point about Romeo and Juliet. Keep up the good work.

~SirScott

Lovely. Very poetic, beautiful and then you throw in something funny. I like it.

This would make a fantastic poetry slam! And I absolutely HATE the movie Lawrence of Arabia. It was the stupidest thing ever. Great cinematography though, but I swear...maybe that's because I did it for a class? Anyway, I loved the analogy though! I hope that someday you find yourself in a poetry slam and you are forced to read these in the competition because they would be fantastic for it!

:( sad stuff