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effervescent-sentiments 2009-04-07 . chapter 1
I'm not usually a big fan of repetition but I love the rhythm in this it creates. "a better sight a better sight than your eyes." I love that. :D

"and yet;" It's like a sharp breath of anticipation and then nothing. I'm both disappointed and amazed.

I will like perusing this account of yours, for sure.

Jules
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