 starlit x sky 2009-07-31 . chapter 1As always, a brilliant one shot with great characters.
I liked the different POVs, it was interesting to see what they were both thinking about the same situation.
And, as usual, really liked the ending. :) |
 Incohesive 2009-04-01 . chapter 1Great story :D
loved the ending |
 monkyy109 2009-02-25 . chapter 1CUTE i liked the ending how he "kicks her out??"
and really dragged her out to make out with him? yeah awesome :D annyways lovved it |
 Jade Q. Dean 2009-02-25 . chapter 1I like it! I think it's just best one-shot so far ^^ And lol, now you're hooked to 90210 as well? XD
Btw, are the fires yet extinguished over there? |
 Ravina 2009-02-21 . chapter 1Funny how the girl was his brother's fiancee! And I like his boy code at the end...
Good job!
- Rebekah |
 Lily Llynn 2009-02-20 . chapter 1It's kinda different from your other stuff (not so crazy hyper), but I really like this. It's cute and fluffy (as always), but sweet too. Nicole and Troy are incredibly entertaining - I like how they make the other work for it, ahaha. I'm totally adding this to my c2. (:
(Oh yeah... I don't really see what the title is supposed to mean, unless it's like coming to the light and seeing what's in front of you? Or something?) |
 Hazelnut Romance 2009-02-19 . chapter 1wow. i loved that one shot. |
 cherrystraw 2009-02-18 . chapter 1very cute! i love the idea. but i think the ending was a little to abrupt. still very good! |
 Super.Secret.Music.Mission. 2009-02-18 . chapter 1So cute! You did an adorable job...aw! I'm all smiley and happy now. |
 apples ate my chocolate bar 2009-02-18 . chapter 1wow I really do love you oneshots. maybe even more than your stories but that is just because you don't have to wait to find out what happens. you get the happy end and all that at the same time. this was really super good I do like your guy pov but then again when have I ever not liked something you have writen. I miss you lots. air hug. |
 gulistanlik 2009-02-18 . chapter 1I loved every bit of it, thank you, again for another wonderful one-shot. =D |
 SparklingStar25 2009-02-18 . chapter 1This is really good..n really realyy cute!! |
 WhenItRains 2009-02-18 . chapter 1That was cute. And it was very long, but I like it. Just thought I'd review since I only saw two and it deserves more. But now I'm going to be late for school so I have to go. :) Great story! |
 Amphityonis 2009-02-18 . chapter 1this was really cute. i loved it. it kinda cheered me up as i am very annoying ill but hey never mind
thank you |
 RoseLife 2009-02-18 . chapter 1CUUTE
i lufed it
definitely aw worthy well done ^__^ |