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Betrayal
Althea Dreamer
2009-02-24 . chapter 1
I can really connect to the feelings of betrayal. I have been there too. Good Job.
Whaaoouusses
2009-02-19 . chapter 1
Again, your poems are by far one of the best I have read. I can totally relate to this, and I love the rhyming scheme. Amazing work, and I hope that those bastards die. You obviously deserve so much better.
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