I'm going to have to say, that was a good ending. Tragedies are always nice. Especially in love stories, when they die together. :)
So, I won't read the sequel, because they died together. And that is nice.
Thanks.
Just one note:
A lot of the mistakes I noticed where you writing "threw" instead of "through". You might want to check up on that one. :)

That's an odd name... Cainan.

Oh my gosh...I fell in love with this story. I couldn't believe what happened to them on their honeymoon. That was so sad...it got me to cry. Well, I'll be looking forward to the Sequel. :)

It's- standing in the elevator WERE two men.
But good start!

ohh damn lol..you better update soon.