I don't really understand this, but I like it. Lots of cool, surreal imagery.

Wow. Shocking, very raw and very harsh. I loved the first two stanzas for the imagery that you created. The words you have chosen throughout are perfect. Brilliant.

I love the very vivid imagery that goes on throughout the poem. In a lot of poems on this site, people are afraid to have very strong or alternative imagery, but you don't shy away from it. Nice work.

I don't like the pacing of the poem. It would be easier to read if it were more regularly paced.

-Stardust, courtesy of the Review Marathon.

i'm not sure i understand all the concepts but i love it anyway... beautiful imagery, really inventive descriptions... flows really well. :)