just like my story!!
simple words..beautiful sentences..
TOUCHING...

This was beautiful - it flowed perfectly, and the rhyming didn't feel overdone or awkward either. You had a great structure, which is really impressive to me, since I'm terrible at keeping to a set structure xD
My only minor criticism is that I didn't think the poem really tied into the title that much, but then again, that's not really very relevant. Great work :)

Hey!
Sorry I hadn't got round to reading these!
I loved them though! The one where it was another persons point of view was amazing! Congrats!
Wasn't it national day of poetry yesterday or soemthing? lol!
Ek! It can't be your last update! Noes! Aw, can't wait until you update on some more fics then!
Morphox
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Last chappie , aw

I liked the last poem too, felt like it was telling a story, maybe you should try that for your next project: a poem-story :0

I had a idea like that after reading your poems and of another person who wrote one poem but in the form of a story.

Enjoyed them

PB

Really liked this poem, feel like I can relate to it.

If only life was simple and could be a breeze *sob*

PB

this like a bed of roses

Aw!! Thats soo cute! The last line "but the truth is I love you" is soo sweet!! ;)
It's very...Lenka-ish! ;)
Aw! Your writing very cute poems right now...or it's just me being a bit too happy recently! :D
Hope your having a fab easter and keep up with the amazing poems, like always! ;)
See you son! :)
Morphox
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'You and me together is like mixing,
The sunshine with the rain,
I can't stand being away from you,
And I can't face the pain.'

Really liked that part of the poem

I really liked the last couple of poems you wrote,and don'tknow whichof them is my favorite.

Really good, keep it up

PB

Betrayel...something one should nnever know, but we all know so well...hope you get over this person, but i don't think it'll be soon.

PB

I likedthe wordplay in this poem

PB

oH, Beautiful...that poem really breaks my heart.

As always I have my favorites,

and I have to say that of the three poems I just read I liked green grass and he said (the most) more than this one, but well written, and I can see the heart ache

PB

Sounds like a song, especially the beginning!
Like it

PB

This is amazing.. Sometimes in poetry we tend to write about what we know, but never really think about what we don't know. This poem gives me the impression that we should just let the load down and enjoy ourselves and say what the heck..