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Winter Scars 2009-05-25 . chapter 1
This...this I adored. Very good writing, very thick with passion. And perhaps one of my favorite lines..

"Just wait until you meet the Board of Directions."

Pure. ** (literally!). Genius.
superstar89 2009-04-19 . chapter 1
wow...thats all i can say if i was in this situation i dont know what to do
Roxann1472 2009-04-18 . chapter 1
Wow this story was awesome! It makes me wonder if i were in that situation, what would i do?!?
frogs of war 2009-02-19 . chapter 1
Great as always. I hope the last line didn't mean an orgy. I not sure Greg's the type to share. But I guess we know know what he looks for in an intern.


"...and finally to his fellow interns-prospectives. Finally, after... he finally turned his..." Three "finally"s in a row.

And who is this he? "He initially only glanced at him" Was the man staring at Main the entire time and Main was looking around? or did the man glance at Main before staring a him?

"unsure as too where they were going." to

Two "Ina"s instead of Ian

"he stripped off his own business suit which he wore the entire time" I'm not sure the "which he wore the entire time" is necessary.

(Sorry if I seem ** you sometimes, but that last story made me come up with not one but two stories about boys with their mother's boyfriend — one was live-in and in the other boy was fairly young, both squicky — plus a boy "sacrificed" to a dragon.) I wonder what this one will make me come up with.
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