hehe, nice. I like it, you really add good flow to your story. ..and thanks for the awosme review.

My other power implies that she only has two.

'How to create worlds for dummies' that made me smile - it also gives interesting hints about what the character is as well.

The door bell ringing gave it a fun and random mix of magical and mundane as well. It seems off having such short chapters though.

Intriguing prologue, and all that it hints at impending disaster for the character it also has quite a humourous feel to it.

Freebie - Frac gave it to you, so thank her. ;)

I really like the note on which you ended the chapter. Very nice. Not too cliched (often chapters who end similarly to this is) and it really makes the reader want to figure out what's going to happen next. I wish you had the next chap posted, lol.

I would have perferred to see a longer chapter, especially for an introductory chapter, but that's just my taste (I'm notorious for my exceedingly long chapters, lol). Maybe you could lengthen it by describing the protagonist a little more. All we really know about her is her sense of voice and that she's psychic. I'd be interested in knowing more so that I could relate more.

Overall, good start. :)

Very good! Now - please write more? :-)

Hello my darling! I am here again at last, no I haven't made a page yet, I'm far too lazy xD

This story is really interesting, as I happen to know what will happen :P BUT WHY HAVE YOU NOT POSTED UP THE NEXT CHAPTER YET? Argh, think of the poor people, unable to review and feel glorious and..stuff...

This is a great beginning, it sucked the reader in immediately. Dw about the next chappie, as long as you get the rest up in time, one bad seed won't scare people off too badly..

Anyway, talk to you some other time :)

The former Miss Xx Leun (I'm using my dubbed maiden name now xD)

Jazz at your Jazzy service ma'am :p

it's great :D

lol.

despite the fact that i'm listening to "i just can't wait to be king' by the lion king...

but that has nothing to do with the story, which is fab!

the song kinda distracts the imagery...

lol

This is very interesting so far. You build a sense of dread with your narration. I also liked the fact that you made me picture this innocent little cherub at the end, and then the reaction was pretty much 'oh crap.' I enjoy it when a character's nature contradicts its appearance. I hope you will continue this. ]

Very intriguing, leaves a few questions but it just makes me want to read the next chapter even more.

Liked the “‘How to Create Worlds for Dummies’ manual” reference, hope next chapter opens up the world a bit and focuses on specific characters. Seeing as I want to know how the protagonists “divination powers” came to be.

all in all, great beginning. Cant wait for the next chapter.

I still do not know why you rated it T but I'll leave that part to you as the writer. It's great and cool to begin with. Short yet there's already the impact of interest it put in the reader's mind (well in this case, it's my mind.

Hope to see the next chapters of thos story.

Thanks for letting me read it:)

Oh that's intriguing. Since I have no clue what's going on, but it's really interesting. Whole new world. Hope it turns out good, and have no doubt