I just read the whole to story to this point and i have to say; I love this story. I've never read stories with elves and when i saw summaries for elf stories i would be totally turned of, but I am in love. With the story. Maybe... Never mind. Okay. You haven't updated anything for this story in so long, and i'm really sad that i may not get to read more of the story. Please update asap, i'd really appreciate. Thanks! I love you... for writing. I. Love. This. Story!

Great chapter, Lysander's honesty made me laugh :) Update soon!
- Christina

I'm guessing that you are chinese, since you said it that this is a Mary sue story, but forgive me if I'm wrong. I'm vietnamese, though. Great story so far, and I totally raise my hand to the fact that Sebastian is awesome :D Update soon!
- Christina

Really good so far.
Thanks for the trailer that led me to this story :)
~SashalovesErik

Jons...you really need to continue with this story =]

i like it =]

Awesome you really are a good auther. *hands you a coke* you really deserne it.

i'm glad you updated. i can't wait to see what happens next.

This story is so so very very cute! I love the way lysander talks. And he is a gentlemen. and he is an elf. Love it please update soon!! can't wait

Moon

Oh~ I'm really liking it so far! Hehe, I love both Lysander and Sebastian! Please update soon!

I love this story, it is so good and I cannot wait for the next chapter!!
“Yes, I would very much like to ‘get into thy pants’ as well."
MY FAVORITE PART!
it made me laugh
:))

You should keep the way Lysander speaks consistent. You let the thys and thous go after awhile.

it was short but i liked it.
cant wait for more!

Aw, its so cute!
I love Lysander, he's such a...simpleton...but in a good way :)
Update soon please :D

How does Lysander know about sex but not about kissing? That's kinda weird. Anywho, good chapter. I'm excited to see what happens between them next.

Can't wait til the next one. Hopefully it's really long. :D




-Stace :]