 TinyMusicalShore 2009-04-19 . chapter 1"Falling in love is okay, ’cause there’s always someone to catch you" My God, I love that quote. Is that from the movie, or are you just amazingly gifted with words? Well, I'd say you are amazingly gifted with words already, but hopefully you know what I mean.
I liked that, I really did. As I've said, gay boys make my heart happy. Truly, they do. I miss my piano. I should have never let my mother sell it : (...
Anyways, great writing. I'm going to add that quote to my list of quotes, so please tell me wether it's from you or not. I'd like to give proper gratitude to whomever it was : ) |
 kelse-a-bells 2009-03-16 . chapter 1I can't believe I hadn't read this. I was being a lazy-ass when I saw the paragraphs and length and I thoughtm 'This is too long for me right now.' And so, I put it aside. I'm not so stressed out right now and I read it.
This is one of my favorite pieces from you. Thank you for posting something like this. I haven't read something as dark as this is in a long time and it reminded me of how I felt when I used to cut myself. And it was because of my dad too...
Anyways, I think I'm going to write a bit.
Favoriting,
KC |
 Jaded Devil 2009-03-08 . chapter 1The love declaration seemed a little abrupt, but overall a really good job with this story! I especially like how you didn't disclose every single detail about what happened with Kelley and his father, because it leaves a little room for imagination on the reader's part. :) |
 goldenstars 2009-02-25 . chapter 1gah I have spend the last hour and 16minutes going through all your works, while l'm supposed to be doing my homework.
It's not my fault if how you write is addicting, right?
Yer, I like most of your stuff. This especially because its guys and the music theme through it all. I have gay friends, l know how its harder from them to find a partner so l find it cute when it happens on paper, or ah.. computer screen.
great piece |
 Izzey 2009-02-20 . chapter 1wow. you're right, it is different. but i really liked it. i like what Janie said, about not looking at what happened in the past, but what's going to happen. i like that. and scars stay forever, but the meanings behind them don't. but i liked it. excellently done |
 Narq 2009-02-19 . chapter 1Interesting. It's different from what you usually write I guess. Anyways, highly entertaining~
Narq. |
 Evil lil angel 2009-02-19 . chapter 1that is so sweet! |
 Deji 2009-02-19 . chapter 1That was... so... beautiful... *hugs you*
Gosh, we need more stories like this D: |
 Darkness-Princess-Kit 2009-02-19 . chapter 1I love it! That was very touching, very well written! Great work!! |
 yourKonstantine 2009-02-19 . chapter 1If there was one thing Kelley had learned, having a guy on your mind didn’t always mean trouble. But it did always mean that you had better watch your step, or you could fall. “But falling in love isn’t always a bad way to fall,” Janie had told him. “Because when you fall in love, there’s always someone to catch you.”
Gah...it was so cute. I don't care how damn fast the declarations of love came, it was, like, AW.
Piano boys just make me swoon.
Kristen
9always yourKonstantine) |
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