Nice and interesting!
I really like Cass! Well, I like everyone in this story. *laugh* except the cheerleaders. =P
I hope everythin will happen between Cass and Drew.
so short! hahaha dude i can totally relate to this story! i grew up with my cousins! we all lived in the same house!! so they re practically my brothers and durig high school peeps had no idea that we were related! not that they denied it or anything!! they always introduced me as their sis!! but man it was hell when i heard the girls gushing over them!! totally grosses me out needless to say one of them is now engaged to ma best mate! and all that sparring! man!! hurts jus thinking about it!! and the whole puddle thing!! they used to do that to me too!! and how we'd race and fight over the bathroom!! hahha oh crap sorry bout the life story!! i seem to be doin that alot!! but yea totally realistic family! a bit sappy and seems cliche!! so i dont know... try not to fall into that and keep us guessing!! nothing like suprises!!
It seems interesting and good so far. One thing though, six older brothers? So far, I only count five: John, Zach, Jordan, Nate and Todd. Michael is six, is he not? So, six brothers, five older and one younger. Unless...
But anyway, good job. I like it. :]
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