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Eccthlacine 2009-11-24 . chapter 7
Very sweet, fun to read though I kept waiting for the bomb to drop lol. Wasn't very much drama but it was tastefully written and sweet. But it feels like that bomb is still out there somewhere: Mike and Jen were never really finally addressed were they? Can't wait to read more of your work, especially about Olivia and Ben :)
animegirl214 2009-10-27 . chapter 7
aw!~ so cute, sweet and loveable! :)
thanks so much for this awesome story!! :D :D :D
Bluecoco100 2009-10-27 . chapter 1
ha my cousin is studying to be a dietician.
azerjaban@gmail.com 2009-08-06 . chapter 7
So cute and heartwarming, your right everyone does need a bit of fluffy light hearted romance sometimes.

Thank you for the wonderful read.

Azer
AJ southern 2009-08-04 . chapter 7
So sweet. Absolutely adored it! You are definitely a skilled writer
kasandra 2009-08-04 . chapter 4
awesome story so far! I just can't help but notice that there's a fair number of your characters named after those from Twelfth Night. Coincidence?
kristenn987 2009-07-07 . chapter 7
i love this story and especially jamie's character.

i also love the poem in this last chapter. beautiful poem and it fit perfectly into the story.
DeviousVamp 2009-07-07 . chapter 7
This is a really amazing story! It's so well written and I felt so involved with everything that was happening!
I really loved the way you dropped in the quotations, it made me remember my love of old english which is what I really needed right now as I'm not sure about the course I've just been accepted onto, so thank you.
x
BhamBabe 2009-07-04 . chapter 7
Loved your story!
CLOUDSTRIFELOVER4ever 2009-06-27 . chapter 7
great short sweet love story!!loved it! jamie & violet were awesome together!
great work!
cant wait to read more of ur work!
keep it up!!
CLOUDSTRIFELOVER4ever 2009-06-27 . chapter 5
loved the way he "greeted" her...LOL
great job!
CLOUDSTRIFELOVER4ever 2009-06-27 . chapter 4
WOW>GREAT STORY..cant wait to read more!
daling 2009-06-14 . chapter 7
i just read all of this and its awesome.
you sure do know a lot of quotes and poems.
...are you..brilliant?
haha! good one.
umm..the characters between jamie and violet is very different yet same.
i think you did a fabulous job on both character and honestly it is a satisfying read because you actually propose both point of views at the same time.
so a job well done. x)
Red Lips 2009-06-10 . chapter 7
loved this story :D
will ther be a sequal for violet and jamie?
Chaneladoo 2009-06-09 . chapter 7
Just what I needed, a nice simple love story. Loved it to pieces :]
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