|Reviews for Biting My Tongue|
| kyox88 5/19/09 . chapter 1
ouch! it's hurt to read this one!lolz.
| Fallen Harmony 3/22/09 . chapter 1
Man I HATE biting my tongue. xD Nice poem!
| Elephant-Artist 3/8/09 . chapter 1
You some really strong words in this. I don't really know sometimes how to figure out what about the poem or story is good. Metallic taste on my lips is a very strong part of this poem I like this poem a lot. When you review my stuff please tell me what I can fix to make more people want to review it.
| Isca 2/21/09 . chapter 2
"Poisonous bile burning holes in my mouth." Your writing here is particularly good. Nice descriptive wording.
"Words, I'm holding them in for you." Beautiful! :)
| Isca 2/21/09 . chapter 1
"Teeth like leeches." This line is very creative and chilling.
"Contorted." Nice diction.
"Can't silence me anymore." Haunting!
| Narq 2/21/09 . chapter 1
oh well, i can only say you find inspiration in everything