 EsiuoL 2009-03-04 . chapter 1Omigosh! That was really great! Thanks for the review by the way... =)
I love this fic of yours! Going to favs also... hihihihi..
Wow! You sure know a lot of Japanese names... hahaha!
Hotaru and Natsume? Hm... Gakuen Alice characters right? hahaha! O.o!! I just love that anime..
nya!!
Anyway, please update soon, ne?
Ja! ^^ |
 The Writer 37 2009-02-21 . chapter 1Wonderful story so far! I really enjoyed the little details that formed the atmosphere of the setting and the characters. A bit long but I can't complain because something about the story really hooks me. Natsume Yujincho really got me interested in youkai a while back, so when I came across this story I couldn't help but to read it to the end. The only suggestions I have are to be careful of tense switches and excess descriptions of the characters appearances and such, but these are only minor issues. Otherwise great chapter. Looking forward to the next installment.
-PJ |