Hey, come on now, this can't just be a one-shot! This was amazing! And funny. I really enjoyed reading this. The relationship Dorian and his friends have together is real interesting and would be what I'd like to read about from the very beginning of their so called friendship. I have to admit, Dorian's refusal had me smiling.

Definitely an interesting start! My favorite part was "she could read him like a map". I think that says a lot about her character.
Update soon!

This was really good, I'm glad that Dorian finally realised that what he was doing wasn't what he wanted.