This was brilliant, it had me laughing quite a few times. i love it =] please update soon!

*is way happy*

I found this when the site was glitching, and I loved it. Eden is so cute. I love how he doesn't swear and stuff. Your dialogue's awesome, and everything is just...like whoa...

Is this gonna be slash?

*hopeful*

I love it, can't wait to see where its gonna go~

Hmm, less attention? I do believe you are entirely wrong. It's too cute to not have it's rightful amount. Looking forward to chapter2~! (:

Aw, that was cute. Such an interesting start, too. I love Eden. He's so cute and fun and happy :D I can't wait for more. I always love your stories. They always put me in such an awesome mood.

This made me giggle more than once. You're so creative. I love it!