Its good. I like how you used the first paragraph as the last one, but changed it slightly so that it gave you a sense of closure. Nice work :)

ForeverBehindTheImpression / HighOnBrokenWings

This is a moving piece. Every stanza feels laden in suspense. The imagery is great. Then again, it is always great! I'm not sure if the last stanza shift to the left is intentional, but it gives nice contrast.

Patience, you will find the light soon. ; )

Always happy to review,

Ty

it's hopeless and hopeful at the same time, great piece.