This was a good story... and then there was that line: "Then there was this third part, the one screaming STOP FIGHTING, ALREADY! No one, James noticed, ever talked about that third part in books."
Then it was a great story!!

Aww that was cute :)

I swear, there are not enough gay asian character stories on here. Let alone hot ones ;P
So, as an asian, thank you :)

You played on the asian stereotype a little, but hey, sometimes it's hard not to. Like, I admit I play piano, but I completely suck at maths. And the whole kicking Patrick out because of his sexuality thing...well, my parents probably wouldn't do that, but I do know they would disapprove. Needless to say, they don't have any knowledge of my addiction to slash fics.

As for the story, I thought it was plain cute. I know a guy like James too, and I always wondered what it would be like if he turned out to be gay. So I had a James pictured in my mind. And I adored when James just started kissing Patrick. That was awesome. Oh, and denial's always fun to toy around with. I liked Cassie too. She's really sweet.

But now you have me wanting to read more...

this is just so sweet. And for some reason, i love it when people are in denial. it's just so cute!

So..this has been up for almost a month and I haven't read it until now. But...I'm glad that I did read it.

The scenes were short but the story overall, was adorable.

It sounds kind of weird to say, but I wish that some girl got kicked out of her house because she was gay and she she with my family.

Oh my god, that would fucking rock. xD

Keep up the great work!

- KC

Hell yeah, Asians!

There's barely any slash stories on this site about gay Asians, or Asians at all. So when I saw the title, I was pretty excited. I like the denial James has. I especially love the scene where he goes to Patrick's room and just watches him. Totally romantic, got me thinking about Asian dramas. To me, that's THE perfect scene.

The ending is kinda iffy, a little rushed to me. I think if James and Patrick spent more time together, it would all match up, but all in all I liked this story. And I'm not just saying that 'cause I'm Asian :P

I think this is pretty cute and yes, fluffy and harmless. Great job!

OH. EM. GE.
that was lovely. i mean.. like. yeah.
w/e. to tell you the truth, that was massively riddled with stereotypes.
not that that makes it bad. i'm just saying.
math&piano? ask any asian kid if they do that well. i dare you to.

my parents weren't very supportive. but whatever.
self-pity parties are NOT limited to one an hour though.
hehe. and situations like this HAVE happened.
i'm in california. i'd know. hehe.

i liked it. it's a little different from your other ones, but i liked it. well done!