*laugh* I like it. i was wondering why it was in the humor genre until the end.

I was about to comment on how sad that was. Until the ending.
Good job once again. xD

For a while, i couldnt get why you also called the genre "humor", until the last line, at which point i chuckled (perhaps slightly evilly because i recieved quiet a few stares from my family). i liked this poem! it seems like a change of scence from your stories in ten tales of insanity!