Oh, man. I'm horrible with reviewing poetry, but Emily directed me to this piece and I had to drop in to let you know I adored the third stanza. Like... all of it. Just wonderful. The entire piece is brilliant, but the third stanza takes the cake. Brilliant piece right here. Really, amazing, amazing job.

Fucking amazing.

pessimistic, but frighteningly honest.

on the depressing side, but still great imagery. i especially enjoyed the third stanza. the list seems almost rant-like/haphazard

my favorite line(s) has to be: "and we're just fishing for corpses/all week." morbidly profound

the last stanza fits in well with the rest of the poem, reflecting the same "apocalyptic" mood