|Reviews for Echo|
| lookingwest 2/24/09 . chapter 1
the few words really bring across a great image, and the words really pack a punch of senses.
| dchkerwfhkf 3fhkerfhkeghk 2/22/09 . chapter 1
The poem reminded me of the cold haze that is winter. The bitter gray world that surrounds us through these bitter months. Nice work with imagry and the use of words. I also like how you got the images across in such a brief poem. I enjoyed it a lot
With all respects
| burning in effigy 2/21/09 . chapter 1
so i've written two reviews for this poem, and both times, due to the whole 'technical glitch' thing, i've lost both reviews, so now i'm practically livid, and annoyed at myself for forgetting to copy my review before hitting submit.
so i'll paraphrase what i paraphrased in the second review:
once again, love the word choice. the imagery is nice, and your poem definitely paints a picture in my head. overall, the poem reminds me of the whole 'if a tree fell in a forest when no one is around, does it make a sound?" concept; i really like the part in the parentheses- you kind of have an alliteration thing going on with the s's, and it just seems so fitting for the ending.