Nice combination of words and imagery. I am quite partial to things that need to be unraveled with a few good readings and this certainly did satisfy my thirst for such. Good job!

I loved this. Last line struck a seriously deep chord. I'm reading all your poems backward and this is my favorite thus far.

i'm surprised this hasn't been reviewed yet. this is by far in my top three that you've written, and was one of the first i read during the whole "glitch" thing. i loved it then, still loving it now!