This story is so cute! I loved it! :) Did you get your inspiration from Pride & Prejudice? :)

So sweet!
I love squirrels! I have a chipmunk. They are so damn sweet.
Hugs

I loved it but I'm curious. Were you somewhat intentially alluding to Pride and Prejudice? We have the five sisters. Four of them are paired off and the relationships with their parents are a lot like those of the Bennett sisters. Also, we have their personalities and certain events and names (ex. Aunt Liz and Uncle Will (or Fitzwilliam?). Like I said, this is really sweet!

You should write something about Lydia and/or her children!

I love this story, double kudos for you. Your a very gifted writer. Keep up the amazing work.

Oh my freaking gawd! shojo beat rocks! srri...i had to say tat. i am a total...no...not really, just a little into manga and anime 'n i used to collect shojo beat, but the store tat sold it stop selling it. T_T

so...yeah. you have done a mega, oh mighty superb job w/ this story 'n i haven't even read all out of it yet. well im hyper 'n babbling here, so keep writing. you r an amazing/hilarious author.

=]

this is so sweet
i loved it

Aw! You made my day! That is adorable! So, so nerdy and so, so cute! Short and sweet, loved it:).

this story lacks the basic elements of a well-written story, main one being a central conflict that is in the end resolved, whether in a positive way or a negative way being your choice.

Also, the "resolution" in the end is anti-climactic (and not in the way of The Stranger by Camus if you've ever read it) but in a "what's the point?" kind of unresolve.

hahahahaha

i can't believe you're doing Pride and Prejudice with Mary

omg so surprised when i started reading and the characters sounded somewhat--in a very strange way--familiar

Aww this was so cute! I loved this story and even sent it to my mom who never reads fanfiction or anything like that. Keep writing and reading!!

Okay, YAY! But now it's over and I'm sad. :[ Anyway, Liz and Will eloping? There's a one-shot I'd have some fun with. I'm going to imagine Liz pregnant and hormonal for now cause it's fun. I was right about Jas and Jeremy and their four kids. Score for Bratsie! I was pretty on point with Lydia bad marriages, kids she doesn't want, yeah. And Kelly, well, I'd love for that clothing line to be real. GO GREEN!

YAY FOR END OF NUTS ABOUT YOU! -goes to finish Secrets new chapter-

Aw! That ending is so beautifully written! It's sad that it had to end so soon! But it is still very cute! Thanks very much!

-RiBow.

Ojala escribas un epilogo. Realmente me encantan Marie y Adam. Son muy tiernos. saludos

aww...cute ending