|Reviews for Crash and Burn|
| Guest 6/28/12 . chapter 24
what is the title of the sequel?
| LDS Dreamer 11/5/11 . chapter 24
I just read this and I think it is AWESOME! I want the sequel! This was so cool and even though I was disapointed that she and Lucas weren't getting together, I thought it was a good ending. Is she going to spark interest in Trace? I really want her to for some reason.
| Mei 1/16/11 . chapter 8
As I read this story, the only thing that really catches my attention is that (in trope speak) it's almost like a reverse betty and veronica... then again, I don't actually know the whole plotline. :P Anyways, I like it so far and hope to see more good work. :D
| shanaenae123 1/10/11 . chapter 24
awe... it's over :l i love this story!
| shanaenae123 1/10/11 . chapter 23
hahahahaha atleast you updated :D
| July Tarrant 1/9/11 . chapter 24
personally, i loved the ending. i am all for breaking stereotypes and making it untradiotional XD can't wait to see what jamie does in ireland XD
| AbbeyXD 1/9/11 . chapter 23
very cute! love it :)
| chewychester 1/9/11 . chapter 23
You don't have to apologize. It was good, I was just telling you my feelings over it. Not liking how she treating Lucas. I hope this turns in another direction.
| CaNnAbIsCaToNtHeLoOsE 1/9/11 . chapter 24
It was a cool way to end it. Very un-traditional but it definitely worked. Can't wait for the sequel! It's cool that it'll be based in Ireland. For me it will be more familiar grounds, ya know?
Congrats on an amazing story!,
| Daiseyyy 1/9/11 . chapter 24
hahahah.. I guess this answers my quesiton of how many chapters are left? Lol...
As for the sequel, will lUcas be coming back?
Anyways, this was a good ending... It gets us really curious, about if they are ever going to mend their little broken friendship and will that friendship grow into something bigger! I really love it...
Thank you for posting this story up and giving us the chance to read it. I hope to read more from you and I hope, that that sequel will come up soon!
Good luck on any writing you do!
| Daiseyyy 1/9/11 . chapter 23
Aw, Poor doggie! :( Anyways, I love this chapter... But as you were mentioning a sequel to some of your readers... I can't help but wonder if its going to be about Lucas and Jamie? Lol... I'm very curious... Lol..
Anyways, poor Lucas... He's trying to do his hardest but she doesn't seem to like him in the way he wants her too. But I mean whose fault is that... It's his for not noticing her when she was head over heels for him... Lol
Hope you update soon! How many chapters are left?
| mylittlePRINCESS 1/7/11 . chapter 22
LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT PLEASE UP DATE SOON
| mylittlePRINCESS 1/6/11 . chapter 1
Please update soon I am in love with this story and need to know what happens next!
| Ticah 1/2/11 . chapter 7
One of the things I've noticed in this story is that the vernacular is so awkward. It's not really consistent either. Because of this, the characters don't feel real at all, and it makes me feel like I'm reading a warped fairy tale (with the dramatic/cliche pasts and such).
The relationships you've shown are interesting though, and I hope you continue to develop all the characters.
Overall, the writing is about so-so. The descriptive language is decent, but nothing extraordinary, and the characters aren't exactly original or captivating, but there's room to move. You've got some raw ability here that can easily be polished.
After you've completed the story, I'll probably come by to check it. Keep writing!
| Daiseyyy 12/31/10 . chapter 22
No! Two chapters left. It feels like it is only just starting! lol. ANyways, nice chapter. I'm happy that Vadar gets a happy ending! FRom your explanation, he sounds like a gorgeous dog! ANyways, hope you update really soon!