This poem makes me smile.

It's nicely written.

My favorite line would have to be:

"Gray is the color of the Heavens when it wants a break from being glad."

That just makes me laugh.

Good job.

Mau

This is really good. I liked the way the colours represent things we see everyday. Good job.

Beautiful poem. I love this. Such a simple thing, but so deep :)

This is so good! I love how you used colors to symbolize different things we see in everyday life. Great job!