gosh ! you are good, it's pretty exciting and angsty. Love it ! keep going, it's good. you're writing reallu flow ...
thanks a lot for this wonderful story

I LOVE THIS ONE TO :P

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ALI

Oh wow. I FRIGGIN loved this story!! Mira is so hilarious and Michael is truly, her knight, in basically every fight. Hah, if you're up for it, I'd love to see a sequel for this story! Only if you're up for it,of course :)

Lovely lovely story! And can I please have a Michael of my own? Gah! Your writing is amazing as well as this story. I love the underdog theme going on in your work. It's such a nice change.

I normally don't like fantasy but i loved it!

Aw, that was so cute! :D


I really enjoy reading your works.

Aw...a happy ending. Good story. You make me smile.

This is just getting better and better,. Also I love Angel. :D

seriously, this story just gets beter and better, the plot is getting more and more interesting, and the character of Michael actually has a personality (not that he didn't before, but it's just getting better)...

..so much excellent drama :)

This is progressing nicely. The action is well paced. It's exciting, without being difficult to follow. Also, it's still witty.

Let's see here... I find this story, thus far,intriguing. The begining was a good comboniation of explanation and action, the character seems interesting but believable (in the context of a fantasy story). There are some good funny lines--witty, without being all "OMG I can write random things". I shall continue reading...

That's a brilliant story! I'm so glad I found it!

I absolutely am in love with this story. I don't really know what else to say because whatever words I can put here won't amount to anything next to this. But I do sort of wish there was more. I would read a sequel. :) Mira and Michael never really got any time to be happy together.

ah! gorgeous! give me more!!