I like it =). The lyrics have a serene feeling, and I can see this song having a sound similar to Jack Johnson's music. I could be wrong though! Haha. You have so many songs posted, and I'd definitely like to read them all, but I'm going to take my time so I can enjoy them! ^_^

I really like the chorus, it was different and interesting! I also loved the rhyming, and how you chose interesting words, instead just like "you, do, too" things like that! Great song!

Good lyrics. Sha, la, la, la, la got a little annoying, but that really doesn't matter! Good job on the lyrics!
*lael1bologna*