Great story. I loved it. Good Job!

I normally don't review the first chapter, but I thought you should know that I love this. Passionately.
On to the next chapter :)

you scared the crap out of me. i thought that he was dead. dam it my heart is stuck in between sock, sadness and anger. but dam you are good. but why did you have to end it. i want more dam it. i have no life. this is what i do to keep myself for talking to my family. why. i love and hate you at the same time. i hope you make another story. thanks for the wonderful story.

what!? what the hell? how many keys did he make. how did they now hear...never mind that one. what the hell and on the second to last chapter too. i love how your mind works.

finally that took ages. and you cut away as the best part starts you my friend are mean.>.< great chapter.

life is a bitch but those parents need to die. what is up with the bonbons? there just a dam candy dam he went crazy over a candy. what a fat bustard but sill liked the chapter.

keith dose seem to be the kind of person that would fuck anything. but he is stupid not to try anything with leland now that he has him all to himself. stupid i say. but still a good chapter.

man and i thought that this could not get any worse for the kid. the funny thing is im lisening to a song called ur so gay right now. it is kind of funny. but not. now i feel bad about that. i know he is not real but come on do you have to be so mean to him.

wow this kids life sucks. it makes me feel good about my life. now i sound like an ass dam it. too bad this love will never be his. well good chapter. going to read more. i need a life.

let me think about this one...liked it of course. now the stalker know were he is at all times. this thing keeps getting better.

i love this kind of stuff i makes me wish i had someone i love or loved me guy or girl i dont care at this point, the last girlfriend i had turned out to be lesbian. wonderful right. ha i just need to feel loved. man im a winy bitch. but love the chapter. i feel like i divulge way to personal stuff on reviews.

wonderful i like the way you played that. it is a wonder how at this point he has not killed him self. i would have. but hey if he died now i would be sad. i love to put my misery next to someone who really has a miserable life, even if they are not real, it puts shit in perspective. wow i just realized i complain a lot about my life...maybe is should consider killing my self if i complain this much...i wonder.

im glad that i decided to read this. this guys life sucks. and i think im being haunted by the name josh. ever were i go i hear it and people are starting to call me it. i curse the day i decided to name my main character that name. ah. but that has nothing to do with you so. love it and i feel like eating so i must eat or i will die of boredom or something like that. ttfn.

I really loved this. A lot. Everybody in the story are absolutely fucking insane, and it is possible that the lack of bloody revenge on the horrible family disappointed me a tiny bit - but I love it either way. I'm left feeling gleeful and imagining all the ways the revenge COULD happen. Oh, the pain :D

This story was ridiculously funny. I loved the sections describing the different customers. I loved Leland’s attitude. The plot was pretty intense. I'm happy you decided not to kill Keith. That probably would've been too much for Leland to handle.