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Reviews For: The Bakery
Melissa Norvell 2009-09-27 . chapter 1
Nice poem and very insinuating as well. Great job on your play at innuendos.
The True Dreamer 2009-02-26 . chapter 1
Hahaha! This was so awesomely erotic! I love the last 2 lines, they were so cool. Pure, hot and sexy straight from the oven! Genious!
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