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Storyteller's Shadow 2009-02-26 . chapter 1
The last line "I blame you its all your fault" its should be it's. Second line, gloom. Souldn't it be gloomy, gloom doesn't really fit, it's a noun. This poem is darkly beautiful. I like it!
lael1bologna 2009-02-25 . chapter 1
Another good work from iDarkSaya! Good work!
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