Hey Jullian...It's me again. This is a wonderful poem/song, I must say. It's a little different than your other peices. It doesn't have the same flow as most of your writing...But it fits, it's like thoughts being put into a song, so a little choppier is a good thing. Another very good peice. (not surprising) ^^

Love the chorus! Works really well. Wonderfully worded, flows perfectly. Nicely written =]