|Reviews for kiwis|
| brittle hearts 3/1/09 . chapter 1
Amazing descriptions; it almost made me feel like I was really tasting the kiwi. The tongue-in-cheek message was also delivered very well.
| Isca 2/27/09 . chapter 1
This poem is very creative, cheeky, and witty. :P
| lookingwest 2/26/09 . chapter 1
haha, this is full of wit. i like it a lot.
| xxoh-the-possibilitiesxx 2/25/09 . chapter 1
i liked this because it was like the kiwis, bitter but sweet, and i really like that kind of poem, and writing in general.