|Reviews for Intrusive and Arrogant|
| borderless 1/10/13 . chapter 5
I don't like that Jack never seems to have a backbone and when he does Evan knocks him down a few more pegs. It's seriously frustrating that Jack has no control over situations what so ever and Evan doesn't even act like he loves Jack. Sure he lusts over him but he doesn't seem to care that he keeps hurting Jack time and time again while only acknowledging it for a second before doing it again. Jack is already the younger of the two siblings, has a people problem, anxiety attacks, and no previous sexual relationships. I think he's at enough of a disadvantage without Evan adding to it! I can't imagine them in an actual relationship without them being equals (that's how abusive relationships start! :P) I think you're writings fine and the whole concept had a lot of potential since brother/brother fics aren't very common but I just don't like the characters all that much but seeing the other reviews that might just be me so don't take any of this the wrong way! Just not my type of story is all.
| morningstorm70 1/4/13 . chapter 10
That was a great story could really feel the anxiety the emotion
| KissForARose 12/31/12 . chapter 10
Do us girls have this weird thing that MxM pairings are the best ever? Coz i certainly do, and u know what? i fucking LOVE it! write that sequel NOW or i'll find ya. I'll hunt you down in the middle of the
night and slowly kill you whilst you sleep if you DO NOT write that damned sequel.
| xXx.Taki.Aya.Miyamoto.xXx 12/21/12 . chapter 10
Splendid read. Thank you soooo much for sharing such and amazingly intense work! *heart*
| arsay 12/20/12 . chapter 10
Omg... I Love this story. Poor jack is so clueless sometimes. But I feel even worse for even because he has to deal with the jealousy...
I really can't wait for the sequel. Hope you don't break them up. I would love to see jack realize as to how important Evan is to him, a little bit f jealousy from him would also be nice. I don't know why but it doesn't feel right when he considers Liz to be more important, so I hope his feelings will change.
| Starlite Nightfall 12/3/12 . chapter 10
This story is so perfect and so fucking beautiful and sexy and I love you! I had finals today but I am a fool and last night I could not resist my 2 month-long-slow-building craving for some boy love-particularly of the brotherly variety-and this story was such a cathartic release for me! Fucking amazing! So well written I read chapters 1-9 in one night from like...10 pm to 1 am! I only slept for like 5 hours but it's okay because despite slightly worrying about finals I was so fucking happy all day because of Jack and Evan and your beautiful talent that brought them to life and created a wonderful world for my terrible mind to play around in all day!
The way you write is so perfect and similar to how I feel that I write (or strive to anyhow) that it flowed so well and often I forgot that unfortunately I was neither Jack nor Evan and that I was just some chick staring at a laptop for 3 hours in her bed ._. Your timing, your expression, your way of talking and humor and set up and these SITUATIONS you come up with! So facking goooood! I am going to favorite this story and also you as an author and I am going to NAVIGATE through your other WARES and hope to find more gems like this one! 3 I love you ;o;
| shounengirl13 12/2/12 . chapter 10
| Rui 10/20/12 . chapter 10
This was an enjoyable read! I really like how there's both Evan and Jack's point of view and of course, the way which it is written. I do hope you will post a sequel on this story quickly, because I'm dying for more :)
| BRONZING 9/20/12 . chapter 1
Please continue this story, Evan and Jack would make an awesome couple. I want to read about them doing couple stuff...like getting jealous and possessive.
| ThatChickMelanie 8/13/12 . chapter 9
took em long enough. lol. but i loved it! couldnt stop reading till the end3
| ThatChickMelanie 8/13/12 . chapter 8
i dont think i posted this on the last chapter but i had to mentally prepare myself to read after the sentence when Enan pulled Jacks boxers down. i was like 'omigod omigod omigod'.. it was crazy
| ThatChickMelanie 8/13/12 . chapter 6
omigosh. im like sitting talking to myself like, "poor Jack! etc etc" and "no Evan! you lost your control!" lmao
| Sophie 8/9/12 . chapter 10
Well, crap. Now I've read all of your stories. Where the hell am I supposed to go from here? The other stories I read seem sucky compared to yours :C You've ruinedddd meeeee...
| WaffleNommer 8/8/12 . chapter 10
Dang. It ended already? Kinda wish Liz found out and everything would go all happy. Oh well. Very nice writing. Barely... I mean no spelling mistakes. If so I hardly noticed. This is the kind of writing I like.
| Guest 8/2/12 . chapter 9
Oh! I would love to read more! How their love will go from then on...
Thank you for your wonderful story))) Kepp it up!)