|Reviews for she don't like me|
| Elephant-Artist 3/8/09 . chapter 1
Nice rhyming. It goes really well with the poem. It must take a long time to write over 200 items. Please read and review my stuff. the more reviews the better.
| all you need is oxygen 3/7/09 . chapter 1
the first two lines remind me of an old rock song.
i like the contrast,
and the repetition of the "bees" thing.
i've never read anything like this.
| Isca 2/27/09 . chapter 1
"She likes the bees." The implications here are so beautiful and sad.