this is pretty! :)

My speakers did that too! (so I got new ones. I think it was a short in a cord/wire/thingamajiggers) Anyway, this is a very... cool(?) poem. Not a good word, but the only one I can think of now. (not very artistic or meaningful, sorry)

I like the ending, it was very pretty! Loved it!

scary but lovely.

It's creepy, in a very good way. And an interesting place to get inspiration from! There's something wrong with my mp3 player... but unfortunately the only sound it makes is a loud cracking noise when I turn it on. Not something strangely inspiring like you got.

I like the way you repeat "it's coming back to me". That really adds to the tone. Lovely poem, ).