wow thats al i have to say !and i love you and willnever give you your heart back

That is so sad. I love the emotion and feeling you put into this piece of work. Great job! But, still its sad.

Chelsea Elizabeth

Wow amazing!

Made me sad, but i love it!

one word to sum?

amazing .

ah-ma-zing.

You have such a great talent, you MUST write more. This is fantastic im not not even joking. Theres so much emotion and I can totally relate.

:)

my favorite part:

Why is my heart still beating for yours?

While yours forgot all about mine…

You stopped feeding, and watering my heart..

the metaphors are good.