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nicolee. 2009-11-24 . chapter 16
naww I really liked this story:) when I saw that it was only 15 chapters I thought it was gonna be too short but I loved the ending it's cute
A Broken Heart Neva Heals 2009-10-31 . chapter 16
no its over i wish there was more its such an amazing story
MintCcIceCream 2009-09-28 . chapter 16
Aww!! This is such a cute story! I love it!! I honestly think you picked a really good spot to end it! Some stories drag out the drama for so long, but you knew when to end it and it was great! I love the charcters and the whole forced engagement thing!! Good luck writing and with life and other stuff! LOVE THE STORY!
Love,
MintCcIceCream ♥
the reader 2009-08-19 . chapter 1
Haha! I love it already! Keep going, it's awesome.
Carlotta Lynn 2009-08-03 . chapter 16
Cute story! Loved it! I hope I read some more from you soon!
Amused Bookworm 2009-07-31 . chapter 16
That was a good ending... I feel a little bad for Jeremy 'cause he does not have the happy ending like the rest... But the other three seem pretty darn happy and their dynamic is hilarious.
Faniia 2009-07-31 . chapter 16
hahahaha a perfect ending =P

Faniia
HelgaBertoni 2009-07-31 . chapter 16
Loved it! It had a sweet ending!
heidipandabear 2009-07-31 . chapter 16
All I have to say is aw.
All is well :)

Love the whole story!
xxx Queen Of Slayers xxx 2009-07-31 . chapter 16
Hehe OMG This was GREAT!! XD
AlphaBeatKayGee 2009-07-31 . chapter 16
O! Its overr! That was a cute epilogue. It was a great journey and i loved the chapters! I can't say update soon anymore=(. Well! Keep writing and doing all the things you love!
MarloCarlo10 2009-07-28 . chapter 15
Ha.Ha.Ha No way in hell not even if it was Robert Downey Jr would I pay $60 for a guy XDD

Cute chap.

Ahh sucks for Millie, maybe if she didn't have a temper she wouldn't have admitted it ;)
Faniia 2009-07-27 . chapter 15
hey! awesome story! although the end seemed a bit rushed but still
i liked it a lot, i can't wait for the epilogue! please update soon!!

Faniia
Rae Kitano 2009-07-27 . chapter 15
Great story, well done. Looking forward to the epilogue.
PmpknQueen 2009-07-26 . chapter 15
it was a good ending but it still feels incomplete to me, like it ended arbuptly. love the plot but it felt like it should of been longer. but still i love it
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