oh wow. If your fic was just a little bit more well-written this would be one of hell of a scary one-shot. Really liked your plot. Gave me the chills o.o

Oh wow, such a good story Madi! It's really interesting, if somewhat creepy...

"Mary’s mother was so object to moving to France" object should be objected

Come on Fey, there’s nothing to be afraid off…
It should be 'of'.

Wow.. I like ingenious stories like this. I love the plot. Good job.